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Devious Literature by Michel-le-fou


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Like a ghost in the night
A white shadow in the darkness
Silent as the grave
It hunts you.

Teeth like daggers,
Claws like knifes,
Eyes of an Eagle,
It stalks you.

It can hear your heart quicken
It can smell your fear.
Better run now
Its after you.

Its faster than you
It enjoys the chase
One bite and its over
Its playing with you.

Its breath is on your neck
Its growl is a whisper in your ear
Its ready to pounce.
So tell me
Who's afraid of the big bad wolf?
Another poem, comment and tell me what you think!
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TheDoorWithin Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
!Awesome + plz  I love the mood and the imagery. Really appeals to the senses (and NOT in a good way xD which is awesome cause obviously it's supposed to be scary)!

(One thing. Shouldn't it be 'one", not "once"? Or am I not understanding the context?)
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Vanelopes-corner Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very much, I appreciate it. Hug  And yes it is, thank you for pointing that out, I've read this poem over and over again and never seen that haha 
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TheDoorWithin Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
No problem! :D Lol, I have done the same thing sooooo many times xD 
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KittySib Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2014
Exciting and fun!:D
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Vanelopes-corner Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very much :D
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KittySib Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2014
:D
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EmeraldGuardian-04 Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh, gosh. xDD Horror isn't my type of thing. I'd be scared dead if this ever happened to me. ^^;
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Vanelopes-corner Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Haha me too. What a way to die right?
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Eqonosp Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Very nice :)
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Vanelopes-corner Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very much :D
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